- For my first elevator pitch, I did not receive a lot of feedback... however, I still changed this next pitch based on what the person had said about my first one. The part that stood out to me the most was that he liked the way I added a question in the beginning. I always try to do this to hook my audience and keep them interested. I did not find any feedback wrong or silly, just extremely kind and helpful. I also think that the feedback was very helpful and also he commented on the statistics I had added, so I kept that in there as well. I personally had my own feedback and based it on that as well.
Wednesday, July 8, 2020
Elevator Pitch #2
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Hi Mayson,
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch! I really liked the way you structured your introduction with a question for the audience, it really helped hook the audience. I think the statistics you included in your pitch were also very helpful in promoting your idea to protect the oceans. I think you did a great job on this pitch and I look forward to see how your idea progresses.